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forever_free Refusing Senior Prom
Number of posts : 369 Age : 33 Location : being kept hostage by edward Humor : it's eve's fault we can't all be naked!!! Registration date : 2008-03-03
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Wed Apr 16, 2008 7:47 am | |
| never mind i can't remember it lol sorry. i'll post it later, it's really good though. well it's my fav | |
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Lindz Visiting Carlisle in the ER
Number of posts : 643 Humor : I laugh at almost anything and everything (especially stupid humor)! Registration date : 2008-03-01
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:46 am | |
| Edward_lover_63801: I loved your poems, they were sad, but so so so great!
Edwardrules1: I thought your poem was really meaningful and beautiful! I felt like I could connect with your poem in a sense! | |
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CarmenCullen:) Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2899 Age : 30 Location : In my happy place.... Humor : love...it only happens to the lucky Registration date : 2008-02-21
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Wed Apr 16, 2008 8:56 pm | |
| I liked them all guys. Tiff: those were really cute Rachel: I loved it!!!! | |
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slashy snow eagle Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 5300 Age : 31 Location : winning both the post war and the jasper war Humor : GRAMMAR NAZIS - Netspeak is not an option... Registration date : 2008-02-20
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:04 pm | |
| edwardrules (are you rachel?), that was amazing! tiff, yours rock too! okay, now let's see if i can actually think of anything good... so this is a song that i wrote. i don't like it nearly as much as i did then, but it's all i have to offer: Welcome Welcome to my heart, Step in if you so dare. It's dark and cold and empty; All it contains is air. Look carefully around, And tell me what you see. Be careful what you step on; 'Cause you're stepping straight on me. So take me by the hand, And pull me towards the light. I'll follow you forever; I know that this is right. Walls and ice and broken tears, Are all that it contains. Look around, and can you see, That devastation reigns? I've crumpled into little bits, To save me from myself. To put me back together now, Just offer me yourself. So take me by the hand, And pull me towards the light. I'll follow you forever; I know that this is right. You can't fix, what is not broken; You can't sing, what is not sung. You can't have, what is not offered; You can't catch, what is not flung. So take me by the hand, And pull me towards the light. I'll follow you forever; I know that this is right. Yes take me by the hand, And bring me to the light. I'll walk with you forever; I'm sure that this is right. Yes take me by the hand, And bring me to the light. I'll walk with you forever; I'm sure that this is right. | |
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fangsup21 Debating About the Immortal Soul With Edward
Number of posts : 1972 Age : 33 Location : being awesome with josie hoe and kt skank Registration date : 2008-03-17
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:41 pm | |
| josie, you should post "the difference between boys and girls". that's one of my favorites of yours. then again, all of them are fantastic... | |
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Edward_lover_63801 Debating About the Immortal Soul With Edward
Number of posts : 1933 Age : 28 Location : Missouri Humor : I wasn't trying to kiss you, just smell your lipgloss Registration date : 2008-01-22
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:35 pm | |
| Anne: Yours was really good!! I <3'ed it!! Carmen: Thanks for the comliment Lindz: I know my poems are sad but I write poems when I'm sad so thats why they're that way...But thanks for the compliment | |
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edwardrules1 Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2406 Age : 29 Humor : I dont suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it. Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:45 pm | |
| Anne yours was great! thank you all who commented on mine | |
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Vampgirl18 Making the Cowardly Lion Look Like the Terminator
Number of posts : 1880 Age : 29 Location : in a corner somewhere Humor : you are only as strong as the tables you dance on, the drinks you mix and the friends you roll with. Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:06 pm | |
| omg rachel that was awesome if you showed murdick that he would think of you in an all new way like you actually have something going for you not the emma kind of way | |
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edwardrules1 Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2406 Age : 29 Humor : I dont suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it. Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:42 pm | |
| ahh thanks anna that makes me feel so great *said in a sarcastic tone* anyway murdick already knows that i can write just not poems because of the whole rewrite of benchmark thing | |
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Edward_lover_63801 Debating About the Immortal Soul With Edward
Number of posts : 1933 Age : 28 Location : Missouri Humor : I wasn't trying to kiss you, just smell your lipgloss Registration date : 2008-01-22
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:07 pm | |
| I had no clue what I was saying it didn't ryhme and so on but here it is....haha Nine In the Morning Wake up my sweet... It's nine in the morning and I am screaming at the world This place that surrounds me my personal hell you could say. It sucks out loud!! Thats why I'm screaming all the time I smile like it's nothing and say everythings okay and everyone believes me, but they won't someday. One day I'll stand above everyone and scream to the heavens "It's me that you want! Take me away!" It's no secret that i need to leave this place, I don't belong here So wake up society I'm screaming at Nine in the morning for the world to turn arouund and look in my perspective.. | |
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Samantha Cullen Getting the Dagger & Mace for the Jake & Mike Induced Killing Spree
Number of posts : 2392 Registration date : 2008-02-02
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:24 am | |
| I like it I like all your poems, guys!! I wish I could write poetry. Sadly, it's not my thing. Anne, you didn't tell me you could write songs!! That was amazing! | |
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Lindz Visiting Carlisle in the ER
Number of posts : 643 Humor : I laugh at almost anything and everything (especially stupid humor)! Registration date : 2008-03-01
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:33 am | |
| Sam: don't worry I am in the same boat as you!
Anne: Sam is right, that was amazing! | |
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edwardrules1 Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2406 Age : 29 Humor : I dont suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it. Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:11 pm | |
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slashy snow eagle Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 5300 Age : 31 Location : winning both the post war and the jasper war Humor : GRAMMAR NAZIS - Netspeak is not an option... Registration date : 2008-02-20
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:35 pm | |
| tiff, that was really good!
sam and lindz, thanks! i don't think i'm very good at it, but i go through phases where i'm obsessed with writing poetry and phases where i can't write to save my life. *sigh* | |
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CarmenCullen:) Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2899 Age : 30 Location : In my happy place.... Humor : love...it only happens to the lucky Registration date : 2008-02-21
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:53 pm | |
| you guys are all like REALLY uber good poets. | |
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Edward_lover_63801 Debating About the Immortal Soul With Edward
Number of posts : 1933 Age : 28 Location : Missouri Humor : I wasn't trying to kiss you, just smell your lipgloss Registration date : 2008-01-22
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sat Apr 19, 2008 12:20 am | |
| Hah Thanks to all that said they liked it...I didn't...but you know whatever works...haha | |
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Samantha Cullen Getting the Dagger & Mace for the Jake & Mike Induced Killing Spree
Number of posts : 2392 Registration date : 2008-02-02
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sat Apr 19, 2008 7:15 am | |
| Well it was good Anne, believe me, that was brilliant! I've seen people try to write songs before (at my school) and most of them completely fail at it. I liked yours. Lindz, I'm glad there's somebody else like me! | |
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Edward_lover_63801 Debating About the Immortal Soul With Edward
Number of posts : 1933 Age : 28 Location : Missouri Humor : I wasn't trying to kiss you, just smell your lipgloss Registration date : 2008-01-22
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:18 pm | |
| Thanks you once again
And I believe shes right Anne....It was really good | |
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edwardrules1 Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2406 Age : 29 Humor : I dont suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it. Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:40 pm | |
| i agree with the two above me anne, it was great | |
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Lindz Visiting Carlisle in the ER
Number of posts : 643 Humor : I laugh at almost anything and everything (especially stupid humor)! Registration date : 2008-03-01
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:33 pm | |
| Yeah, me too Sam! We need to find something that the two of us are both good at! | |
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ibellaisabella Buying An Audi With Edward
Number of posts : 334 Age : 42 Registration date : 2008-02-14
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:42 am | |
| prt 1 of post Thoughts of Love.... You tore down all my thought of guys, from bad to exceptionally good made me believe in love, even helped me feel special changed my life and thoughts was your best friend, now I’m your girlfriend only time seems to be stalling if only you could see everything that I’m feeling would you try to take away the pain? If I cried, would you kiss away my sorrow? These feeling’s I have aren’t a lie. If I told you right now, that I love you... What would that mean to you? Is it something that’ll make or break your world? I know that you’re far away You don’t need to give me anything, but your love. No matter what people say, I know that my love for you is always going to be there you’re locked inside my heart and always will be till the day or night I get to be with you again, I’ll continue to think and dream of the 2 of us.
My FAIRYTALE Silences run deep; no words are expressable your eyes deceive you, no matter how much you try to hide words aren’t always needed in the case of you and me the soul tells all we feel - in one look Looking out the window tonight, a star shines bright wishing and hoping that this star can bring me closer to you the magic flutters throughout the night sky, like a butterfly a special day I encounter, will be sooner than I think... For love works in mysterious ways. Therefore; I am told, he is the one. The one with the magical touch; the magic that’ll transform me into A fairytale princess - and him my prince.
Vows There seems to be an angeL, lying here by my side... From his dark hair to his loving ways, he means everything to me There never was anyone, who could make me feel so free We have formed a bond, which can and will not be broken. Two individuals; have become one heart, one soul, one mind & one body. Being with him, never makes me feel alone or scared For I know, that I will always have him to turn to Together you and I will be, until the time to say goodbye comes. No matter what happens in life, there will always be our love it soars to the HEAVEN’s above reaches to the highest star shines a light, for one to hold. Forever and always, I’ll remain by your side.
* NEW POEM* One Day I Will Find You Eyes that seem to have a mystery about them, Lips that are so powerful it’ll melt the cruelest of hearts A sweet persona, that can’t be forgotten A lean and powerful body Arms that long to hold someone, nobody can say when. Her lips long to feel his, and his hands caressing her Words that show he cares, his eyes speak to her. His eyes linger on her, and there is nobody else that can take that away where are you? | |
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ibellaisabella Buying An Audi With Edward
Number of posts : 334 Age : 42 Registration date : 2008-02-14
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:42 am | |
| part two of post:
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Sitting on the side, Feeling like I’m drifting away Not sure what to think Don’t really know what to do I see you look at me My heart rate speeds itself to the point of no return Want my feeling’s out in the open Unkown feeling’s take a stab at me is it truly real? Do we even stand a chance? I know there is something that we see and feel in our hearts My heart, the place I thought was safe- a place nobody but me could get to Guess I was wrong.... There is nothing left for us, but to be the me I know the Only feeling we really want to feel is beyound our control it feels like we’ve been struck by a train That’s how heavily this feeling weighs on us - or is it just me?
Runaway Girl
A girl so afraid to face the world, in any way Eyes fill with tears, as she tries to understand Tries to get herself back to where she should be Problems of all types arise, stunnes and confused Tries to gain back that momentum to succeed Hurt, Lost and Alone she keeps running away A huge sense of wanting to be with this one guy Her heart is one with her soul, she trys to gather her courage To do what she must, to make him her’s forever In her eyes, mind and heart she knows if she doesn’t she may lose him for good... and her whole sould will be filled with regret
Indescribable Feelin’
Lyin’ in bed, I lie awake from the tickin of the clock Time seems to pass away, so slowly It hits one am, and my eyes are open wide Thinkin of the man who stole my heart Wishin he’d be somewhere close to me tonight I slowly drift off to sleep, thinkin’ of him As I sleep, i dream of him... He who listens and consoles me Softly, sweetly and passionately Together we are, now and forever... in this dream Now I lie awake again, tryin to contemplate my fate In the end, I’ll do whatever I have to do to make him mine
Unexpressable
Sittin in my room, I listen to some music My eyes fall on a picture of you Words can’t express, how I feel for you If I had to try, I’d never be able to No matter how hard I try, the words will never perfect So in turn, I hope that whatever I write touches your heart In my dreams, the words come perfectly and easily.... Why oh why, can’t it come easily in reality? Someone once told me, if you live life day to day That someone will come, the someone who’ll understand everything you do Who’ll love you forever, but most of all the one who’ll do anything for you Woke up one day, and then it hit me The one I love is, you. I sit here thinkin of you, hoping that nothing will ever break us apart Took apart everything I know, bit by bit To get a better understandin’ of my life And the world around me Still haven’t exactly figured it out completely But I know, together maybe I’ll figure it all out I drift off to sleep, and it is there I get my chance to tell you all I feel for you Never want to let you go, for if I do I know my heart will shatter into a bazillion pieces Cause’ after being with you, no matter how aggresive you can be... There could be no other Addictive you are, no matter how far apart we are There will always be a way to get to where you are.
Will It Be Eternity?
The sun sets and rises, as my love for you changes Spoken in two sets, what can you do? Fill in the blanks, don’t you see the way it all fits together? I sit here and imagine a wonderful life with you The hard times, and the good Never did I actually give up on you, I may have faltered a bit But somehow, someone set me straight Dreams set me back to my true place... never felt so alone Only to realize, that I’ve got you Winds blow from all set directions, taking chances on a lovely new relationship Someday it’ll be for the best, as of now my heart will be here Til’ the day we set our love completely free | |
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Samantha Cullen Getting the Dagger & Mace for the Jake & Mike Induced Killing Spree
Number of posts : 2392 Registration date : 2008-02-02
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sun Apr 20, 2008 4:41 am | |
| Wow, those are deep. I like them - they're really sweet and romantic You're very talented. You're right, Lindz! Hmm... let me think... can you write? Or skate? Do you have a knack for making a fool of yourself? Or slacking off? (Yup, those are my talents ) | |
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edwardrules1 Stopping At A Casino With Alice
Number of posts : 2406 Age : 29 Humor : I dont suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it. Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:38 am | |
| those were really good ibellaisabella! | |
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ibellaisabella Buying An Audi With Edward
Number of posts : 334 Age : 42 Registration date : 2008-02-14
| Subject: Re: poems and whatever Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:12 am | |
| thank you. i was inspired by my 'dream' guy who Stephenie Meyer just happened to write about... and like the poem my fairytale... i have found him. | |
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