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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Wed Apr 16, 2008 7:47 am

never mind i can't remember it lol sorry. i'll post it later, it's really good though. well it's my fav
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:46 am

Edward_lover_63801: I loved your poems, they were sad, but so so so great!

Edwardrules1: I thought your poem was really meaningful and beautiful! I felt like I could connect with your poem in a sense!
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Wed Apr 16, 2008 8:56 pm

I liked them all guys.
Tiff: those were really cute
Rachel: I loved it!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:04 pm

edwardrules (are you rachel?), that was amazing!
tiff, yours rock too!
okay, now let's see if i can actually think of anything good...

so this is a song that i wrote. i don't like it nearly as much as i did then, but it's all i have to offer:

Welcome


Welcome to my heart,
Step in if you so dare.
It's dark and cold and empty;
All it contains is air.

Look carefully around,
And tell me what you see.
Be careful what you step on;
'Cause you're stepping straight on me.

So take me by the hand,
And pull me towards the light.
I'll follow you forever;
I know that this is right.

Walls and ice and broken tears,
Are all that it contains.
Look around, and can you see,
That devastation reigns?

I've crumpled into little bits,
To save me from myself.
To put me back together now,
Just offer me yourself.

So take me by the hand,
And pull me towards the light.
I'll follow you forever;
I know that this is right.

You can't fix, what is not broken;
You can't sing, what is not sung.
You can't have, what is not offered;
You can't catch, what is not flung.

So take me by the hand,
And pull me towards the light.
I'll follow you forever;
I know that this is right.

Yes take me by the hand,
And bring me to the light.
I'll walk with you forever;
I'm sure that this is right.

Yes take me by the hand,
And bring me to the light.
I'll walk with you forever;
I'm sure that this is right.

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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:41 pm

josie, you should post "the difference between boys and girls". that's one of my favorites of yours. then again, all of them are fantastic...
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:35 pm

Anne: Yours was really good!! I <3'ed it!!
Carmen: Thanks for the comliment
Lindz: I know my poems are sad but I write poems when I'm sad so thats why they're that way...But thanks for the compliment
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:45 pm

Anne yours was great!
thank you all who commented on mine Smile
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:06 pm

omg rachel that was awesome if you showed murdick that he would think of you in an all new way like you actually have something going for you not the emma kind of way
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:42 pm

ahh thanks anna that makes me feel so great *said in a sarcastic tone*
anyway murdick already knows that i can write just not poems because of the whole rewrite of benchmark thing
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:07 pm

I had no clue what I was saying it didn't ryhme and so on but here it is....haha
Nine In the Morning
Wake up my sweet...
It's nine in the morning and I am screaming at the world
This place that surrounds me my personal hell you could say. It sucks out loud!! Thats why I'm screaming all the time
I smile like it's nothing and say everythings okay and everyone believes me, but they won't someday.
One day I'll stand above everyone and scream to the heavens
"It's me that you want! Take me away!"
It's no secret that i need to leave this place, I don't belong here
So wake up society I'm screaming at Nine in the morning for the world to turn arouund and look in my perspective..
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:24 am

I like it Very Happy I like all your poems, guys!! I wish I could write poetry. Sadly, it's not my thing.

Anne, you didn't tell me you could write songs!! That was amazing! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:33 am

Sam: don't worry I am in the same boat as you!

Anne: Sam is right, that was amazing!
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:11 pm

i like yours tiff
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:35 pm

tiff, that was really good!

sam and lindz, thanks! i don't think i'm very good at it, but i go through phases where i'm obsessed with writing poetry and phases where i can't write to save my life. *sigh*

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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:53 pm

you guys are all like REALLY uber good poets.

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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sat Apr 19, 2008 12:20 am

Hah Thanks to all that said they liked it...I didn't...but you know whatever works...haha
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sat Apr 19, 2008 7:15 am

Well it was good Very Happy

Anne, believe me, that was brilliant! I've seen people try to write songs before (at my school) and most of them completely fail at it. I liked yours.

Lindz, I'm glad there's somebody else like me! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:18 pm

Thanks you once again

And I believe shes right Anne....It was really good
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:40 pm

i agree with the two above me anne, it was great Smile
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:33 pm

Yeah, me too Sam! We need to find something that the two of us are both good at!
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:42 am

prt 1 of post
Thoughts of Love....
You tore down all my thought of guys,
from bad to exceptionally good
made me believe in love, even helped me feel special
changed my life and thoughts
was your best friend, now Iím your girlfriend
only time seems to be stalling
if only you could see everything that Iím feeling
would you try to take away the pain?
If I cried, would you kiss away my sorrow?
These feelingís I have arenít a lie.
If I told you right now, that I love you...
What would that mean to you?
Is it something thatíll make or break your world?
I know that youíre far away
You donít need to give me anything,
but your love.
No matter what people say, I know that my love for you
is always going to be there
youíre locked inside my heart and always will be
till the day or night I get to be with you again, Iíll continue to think and dream of the 2 of us.

My FAIRYTALE
Silences run deep; no words are expressable
your eyes deceive you, no matter how much you try to hide
words arenít always needed in the case of you and me
the soul tells all we feel - in one look
Looking out the window tonight, a star shines bright
wishing and hoping that this star can bring me closer to you
the magic flutters throughout the night sky, like a butterfly
a special day I encounter, will be sooner than I think...
For love works in mysterious ways.
Therefore; I am told, he is the one.
The one with the magical touch; the magic thatíll transform me into
A fairytale princess - and him my prince.

Vows
There seems to be an angeL, lying here by my side...
From his dark hair to his loving ways, he means everything to me
There never was anyone, who could make me feel so free
We have formed a bond, which can and will not be broken.
Two individuals; have become one heart, one soul, one mind & one body.
Being with him, never makes me feel alone or scared
For I know, that I will always have him to turn to
Together you and I will be, until the time to say goodbye comes.
No matter what happens in life, there will always be our love
it soars to the HEAVENís above
reaches to the highest star
shines a light, for one to hold.
Forever and always, Iíll remain by your side.

* NEW POEM*
One Day I Will Find You
Eyes that seem to have a mystery about them,
Lips that are so powerful itíll melt the cruelest of hearts
A sweet persona, that canít be forgotten
A lean and powerful body
Arms that long to hold someone, nobody can say when.
Her lips long to feel his, and his hands caressing her
Words that show he cares, his eyes speak to her.
His eyes linger on her, and there is nobody else that can take that away
where are you?
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:42 am

part two of post:


Untitled #1

Sitting on the side,
Feeling like Iím drifting away
Not sure what to think
Donít really know what to do
I see you look at me
My heart rate speeds itself to the point of no return
Want my feelingís out in the open
Unkown feelingís take a stab at me
is it truly real? Do we even stand a chance?
I know there is something that we see and feel in our hearts
My heart, the place I thought was safe- a place nobody but me could get to
Guess I was wrong....
There is nothing left for us, but to be the me I know
the Only feeling we really want to feel is beyound our control
it feels like weíve been struck by a train
Thatís how heavily this feeling weighs on us - or is it just me?

Runaway Girl

A girl so afraid to face the world, in any way
Eyes fill with tears, as she tries to understand
Tries to get herself back to where she should be
Problems of all types arise, stunnes and confused
Tries to gain back that momentum to succeed
Hurt, Lost and Alone she keeps running away
A huge sense of wanting to be with this one guy
Her heart is one with her soul, she trys to gather her courage
To do what she must, to make him herís forever
In her eyes, mind and heart she knows if she doesnít she may lose him
for good... and her whole sould will be filled with regret

Indescribable Feeliní

Lyiní in bed, I lie awake from the tickin of the clock
Time seems to pass away, so slowly
It hits one am, and my eyes are open wide
Thinkin of the man who stole my heart
Wishin heíd be somewhere close to me tonight
I slowly drift off to sleep, thinkiní of him
As I sleep, i dream of him...
He who listens and consoles me
Softly, sweetly and passionately
Together we are, now and forever... in this dream
Now I lie awake again, tryin to contemplate my fate
In the end, Iíll do whatever I have to do to make him mine




Unexpressable

Sittin in my room, I listen to some music
My eyes fall on a picture of you
Words canít express, how I feel for you
If I had to try, Iíd never be able to
No matter how hard I try, the words will never perfect
So in turn, I hope that whatever I write touches your heart
In my dreams, the words come perfectly and easily....
Why oh why, canít it come easily in reality?
Someone once told me, if you live life day to day
That someone will come, the someone whoíll understand everything you do
Whoíll love you forever, but most of all the one whoíll do anything for you
Woke up one day, and then it hit me
The one I love is, you.
I sit here thinkin of you, hoping that nothing will ever break us apart
Took apart everything I know, bit by bit
To get a better understandiní of my life
And the world around me
Still havenít exactly figured it out completely
But I know, together maybe Iíll figure it all out
I drift off to sleep, and it is there I get my chance to tell you all I feel for you
Never want to let you go, for if I do I know my heart will shatter into a bazillion pieces
Causeí after being with you, no matter how aggresive you can be...
There could be no other
Addictive you are, no matter how far apart we are
There will always be a way to get to where you are.

Will It Be Eternity?

The sun sets and rises, as my love for you changes
Spoken in two sets, what can you do?
Fill in the blanks, donít you see the way it all fits together?
I sit here and imagine a wonderful life with you
The hard times, and the good
Never did I actually give up on you, I may have faltered a bit
But somehow, someone set me straight
Dreams set me back to my true place... never felt so alone
Only to realize, that Iíve got you
Winds blow from all set directions, taking chances on a lovely new relationship
Someday itíll be for the best, as of now my heart will be here
Tilí the day we set our love completely free
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sun Apr 20, 2008 4:41 am

Wow, those are deep. I like them - they're really sweet and romantic Very Happy You're very talented.

You're right, Lindz! Hmm... let me think... can you write? Or skate? Do you have a knack for making a fool of yourself? Or slacking off? (Yup, those are my talents Razz)
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:38 am

those were really good ibellaisabella! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: poems and whatever   Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:12 am

thank you. i was inspired by my 'dream' guy who Stephenie Meyer just happened to write about... and like the poem my fairytale... i have found him.
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