poems and whatever

lol that guy in Tony Hawk underground says that... skittles for skillz

lol.

i want some anyway. i have no skills . actually, that's not technically true, but who cares?

i'm just glad heather likes my lyrics cuz i like her music. lol.

then you two are a good team ! none of my friends write, so i can't work with them.

that sucks. i'll work with you! lol

i'll keep that in mind ! i don't have anything that i need to work with someone on right now, but i'll let you know if i do!

none of my friends, except Jen, like to write, so yeah. and Jenica likes to write her own stuff, so yeah.

I like to writw my own things too!! Haha other people say they would like to work with me and i'm like sorry I don't do that. But thanks for the compliments I try my best to write good. Sometimes I just write and comes out the way it does. *Shrugs* No biggie.

Stay

I can't imagine a world without you
A world without you seems like hell
Now that I know what I could have
I am going to be completly selfish till I get it
So if I don't my world will come crashing down
There's no one else that is like you
Theres no one else that can make me laugh as hard
Your the only person that matters now
Please don't use me up until I'm gone
You are the only one I trust to hold onto my heart
So don't break it in the process of holding it to your chest
Have you ever had the feeling you want to hug something to death?
Well I know how it is but please don't break my heart
I put my heart into your hands and I expect it to not come back shattered and torn.
Baby your all I have left in this cruel world
Don't go away when I want you to stay

The Sad Story Of Love

Forever may seem long to you
But that is who long I have loved you
You say the Forever you will not care about me
That I can take my Forever love and feed it to the homeless
When you say you don’t care about my Forever love it makes me wonder
Are you worth it?
Will it last
When you say the things that break my heart
You take a little piece of we
You kill me a little inside
So why do I love you
Is it true?
The love that I feel for you
No it’s not
By why do I still feel this way?
Why cannot I get over you?
Maybe my Forever love is true
But you don’t care
All you care about is your
Friends
And yourself
I though you were selfless
I though you were true
But now I know
It will never come true

those are both amazing! kenshin, i love the last two lines of yours. that's so true.

tiff, yours really connected with me. it was just really really well done!

Thanks Anne!!

And Kenshin very good. It took me a second to understand the misspelled words but I eventually got it!! Haha nice!!

sorry!!!

It's fine

Another poem

He's not that great
So why is he so important?
I've known him forever
But we stopped talking for what seems like a short time
So many things to talk about
So many things to scream and shout
So I love him and it shows badly
But he doesn't see it
Everyone else sees our love
It's different to him than it is to me
So many changes for him to see
So I'm addicted to him
Does that make me a bad person?
I hope not
I love him so much but he doesn't see whats right in front of him to grasp

*This poem was not meant for the boy that lives in another state..It's actually for a guy next door to me....I love him alot but I deny it when my friends ask. Like I said in the poem he is older than me by like two years but I could make an exception for a boy I have known my whole life...I hang out with him any chance i get...He's just so awesome...He just doesn't see whats in front of him...Or maybe he does but is pushing it away and doesn't want me* tear tear* I'm kinda stuck in a Bella Jake situation....Cept I'm Jake and there's no Edward

Why dont you just tell him? Or ask if he'll go out with you. Youd be amazed at the responses that boys can give.

I don't have the guts

Ah, i didnt have the guts to ask the guy that i liked either.

Eventually i spat it out and even though he said no were still good friends, it didnt change that, and i still ask him sometimes just to see if hell ever say yes, you never know.

Haha yeah I got some really good advice from my friend Hayley so I'll see if that works

"Lilly, Tiffy some times guys say no because they are scared of what there friends will think, whitch is soooooo dumb"

Here's just a quick untitled poem I wrote in a few minutes.
Well actually, I was hoping I'd be able to turn it into lyrics.


And nothing goes right for her,
it just seems all so wrong.
She's just trying way to hard to stand up strong.

They call her crazy,
'cause she wants to live life her own way,
why would she want to be the same, anyway?

And you love her,
or at least thats what you say.
But it can't be true,
its not true,
when she never meant anything to you.

She's free,
and ungraceful.
Her humor,
well, it's quite distasteful

She's annoying,
and loves the night,
and she'll say things,
well,
just to start a fight.

She likes her music loud,
and needs you to tell her its alright.
And well,
she just feels so safe when you hold her tight.

And you love her,
or at least thats what you say.
But it can't be true,
its not true,
when she never meant anything to you.

She says what she pleases,
she doesn't always think things through,
And the only person that actually means something to her is you.

Tiff, I think you should ask him out.
Or at least, talk to him more again.
The age difference shouldn't matter that much.
My boyfriend is actually two years older than me.
Though, things are kinda rocky between us now.
I have a feeling he likes my friend who is two years older than him....
{4 years older than me}

tiff, i honestly have nothing to tell you. i've decided that i'm unqualified to give relationship advice . but the poem was lovely!

drea, i loved the song! it was really deep. and i'm sorry you and your boyfriend are having issues. hope it works out for you!

Thankies and thankyou.
=]

aww! addicted, i loved you song lyrics! those are really good! i try to write songs too, so i mean that truly.

Thank you soo much.
=D
All this feedback and comments mean a ton to me.

I love the song/poem Drea!! Haha thanks for the advice...Well I'll see how everything turns out sooner or later